Start to finish, as close to perfect as a piece of short fiction can be, especially because it doesn’t read as fiction. The most remarkable aspect for me is how visual the story is, considering it’s almost entirely dialogue. Somehow, you drop the reader directly into the scene, sight, sound, and smell included. If this has never appeared outside of Adamski's blog, it sure as hell deserves to.
Start to finish, as close to perfect as a piece of short fiction can be, especially because it doesn’t read as fiction. The most remarkable aspect for me is how visual the story is, considering it’s almost entirely dialogue. Somehow, you drop the reader directly into the scene, sight, sound, and smell included. If this has never appeared outside of Adamski's blog, it sure as hell deserves to.
That is high praise coming from such an accomplished short story writer! Thank you.
I like the punch line in this one